Tautologies of Summer
By Lorna Crozier
Every morning there are sparrows
and rhubarb leaves. Somewhere
a heron mimics shadows
while desire moves
just below the surface.
In spite of pain
desire repeats itself
again and again
like the snake who
looking for its lost skin
traces its shape in the sand
simply by moving forward.
This is a beautiful poem. Let’s take a look at Big Franks’s travesty or homage to this. It's the repetition that captures Big Frank's imagination. It's entitled:
By Lorna Crozier
Every morning there are sparrows
and rhubarb leaves. Somewhere
a heron mimics shadows
while desire moves
just below the surface.
In spite of pain
desire repeats itself
again and again
like the snake who
looking for its lost skin
traces its shape in the sand
simply by moving forward.
This is a beautiful poem. Let’s take a look at Big Franks’s travesty or homage to this. It's the repetition that captures Big Frank's imagination. It's entitled:
Whirl
by Big Frank Dickinson
Every whirl brings continuance
and duration. Under
us the earth shines
like a strobe light;
in the fullness of time
a wink at eternity.
Squirrels climb to descend
to repeat again and again.
Hawks to the sky and down.
The lungs breathe in and out.
We turn on our beds;
our great expectations
followed by the unexpected,
with revisions of greatness.
Turn, turn turn;
always the same
even when not.
For every deviation,
for every ending,
for every abnormality
is followed eventually
by its own known beginning,
returning again.
In this way we gain
the only way to
measure our days.
No comments:
Post a Comment